5SS-PsychoWiLL's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NG Time Capsule!]

I'd reccomend this for the front page!

This is the kind of sideshow thing you'd see on a website that shows "Most Popular", or "Most Recent". Doesn't Newgrounds already have something like that? It does; and it loads a lot faster!
I guess the music is a nice touch, and the... oh wait, you didn't take time to add transitions.
Since you actually intend to do more: Decrease file-size. Add transitions. Make the frame size smaller, and one size; crop and don't resize your images. Add interaction: You can get tutorials on making the film move forward/back/play by button-click, or by mouse position; you should also have a music mute button.
IMHO: you should redo this, delete this one, and You'll get a much more positive response, because this has no redeeming qualities.

FateNGS responds:

wow....essay?

[Sari and her Bear at 5:30]

Erg, try again...

Where do I start?
It felt kind of frustrating... the story didn't make any sense.

1. Why was Sari up so early in the morning?
2. If Sari is so bent on waking the others, then why does she run away?
3. How did it take almost a half hour to jump out her window, and get into 'Others' room?
4. Daylight saving time typically pushes the time forward ONE hour, so it should have been approx 6:37 am, on that guy's clock.
5. Although I HAVE seen worse run cycles, that definitely needs work. If you want help, there's plenty of tips online, or I'll be glad to help.
6. The part where Sari appears on the hanging lamp is confusing, and uncomfortable.
Furthermore, unless that 'Other' guy has no peripheral vision, he should be able to see Her, unless he was staring directly at the floor.
7. This is the worst: Sari falls through the floor (very easily, I might add) and back into her own room. However, her room was in the room ABOVE this room. That doesn't make any sense!
8. I think you could improve the sound quality. It's way too fuzzy.
9. The blur feature was a bit overused. I think too many animators are overusing it, nowadays...
10. The lip syncing could use some more mouth shapes, but the simple style is fine, and the timing was pretty good, so I'm not complaining!

I hope in the next flash you produce, you take more consideration into the story, and spend more time on animation.

Pahgawk responds:

Gee, thanks for the review. Seriously, it's not everyday that I get one that's actually helpful. I just noticed the fact that she falls through the floor into her room after going DOWN from her room originally... well, I'll definately use your tips for next time.

[Stick Armada V]

Not Very... funny?

Next time, try something more... Original. The Newgrounds Tank Guy isn't very original, and he's especially very unexciting just sitting in the tank doing nothing. Yawwwwn.

mikko-dude responds:

Funny? You were expecting FUNNY?
The newgrounds was put to show where this movie should be seen!
I never claimed this movie to be completely original!

[Hungry Bear]

Meh.

With TB, aren't you supposed to draw most of the graphics externally? I could be wrong.

Luckyapple responds:

I think you can, but you don't need to. besides, I don't own any other animation software (besides pivot, Flash is expensive!), so I don't think that I'll be bothering with that feature just yet. Thanks for reviewing anyways!

[Milkshake (Clay)]

Nonsense

That didn't make any sense. I'm sorry, but if you are going to animate using clay, you should at least have it make sense. You may as well have had a milkshake sitting there, that would have been funnier, and more logical.
When capturing frames, be more careful.

WillyWonkaNerds responds:

it was my first try making a animation using clay i'll try better next time.

[Lucas cant brawl]

Okay

There were a lot of still frames in there. It looks like you simply blocked out an animation with keys. If I were you, I'd go back and fill in the inbetweens.

PS: Lucas is a better Brawler than Snake.

Horsenwelles responds:

blocked out an animation with keys? wtf???

and i know lucas is a better energy based brawler than snake, but snake has waaay more advantages in no-item combat than lucas

i suck as snake and rule as lucas lmao (thats the irony)

[Robot K16]

Why?

Why did it escape? How did it escape? Who shut it off? You give so little information in the story, you lack character development, if you are going to tween, go ALL the way (the magically sliding of pieces into places looks awful), you wimped out on the run cycle, and it could certainly be improved (it looks like he's floating), and Why does he have Garbage bags on him?

Pandoryk responds:

Don't watch at the 1st degree but try to think at the 2nd degree.
Thx for the review anyway ^^

[Blockhead: Quick Shot 2]

The drawing and posing was okay.

The drawings and posing was okay, and most of the animation was pretty good.
All in all, It makes no sense. The story had no consistent plot. The characters and their purpose, was confusing, to say the least.
If you make a Real episode, don't just throw random audio in and animate to it.

The-Swain responds:

It was only a minute long, I'd have to be psychotic to make each of the ten spoken lines have nothing to do with each other. But at least you liked the art I guess?

[Hagrid in Leatherclothes2]

Nice visual opinion

Harry is usually down on his hands and knees getting into some kind of trouble.
Your whip animations could use work, try looking at internet tutorials.

The-master-tommy responds:

Hahaha, yeah like I said; this movie is 3 years old. In my new movie though, animations will be greatly improved.

[Paranoid Ted]

More than sub average

Good work. Please....

Very average in the random department. Try better animation, voice action...

KenSkaii responds:

with very little time constraints it is hard to do so

of course with lots of time i can work wonders