5SS-PsychoWiLL's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kirby 'n' Snoop]

I mis'read

I thought it was Kirby N Scoop! I thought it was a GAME!
I've seen Kirby Poop N Scoop games. This was pretty (ugh) Stylish. You could probably do the lipsynching better. That's about my only problem.

YellowPudding responds:

D: my lipsyncing is my pride in animations. i thought i did it really well D:

[The Beached Whale]

Original, but lacking

Humpack whales are more grey/blackish in colour.
I like the originality, but the animation was kinda lacking.
The Filesize is also WAY to big.

RatherWilde responds:

Thanks for the comments ,
I did try and make everything very colour , due to the innocent nature of it.
What did you find lacking about the animation?

[Robot Run Loop]

You don't have to put everything on NG

I gave it a 1, because the animation was pretty good.
Just because you did a loop, doesn't make it actual content, does it?
A compilation of them might make a nice piece of work.
Practicing is fine, but if it just end's up being like this, why not make it something with more depth?

TheBoogley responds:

good on you big fella for standing up for the integrity of this mighty site. I don't upload everything I make, but I spent a lot of time on this and wanted to share the idea with you guys.

[The Unpresented]

Why did you need collaboration?

I liked the stretchy limbs, but it seemed excessive.
It wasn't anything new, or interesting.

[Run, Darnell, Run!]

Great!

I love it!
The only problem were the Newground references! : (
I see you were going for the "sped-up-because -of-the-different-camera-rate-of-the-
20's-look", but I'm not sure how well it worked... Some parts were a lot faster than others.
Nonetheless, Great story, and great job.

[Krinkels is an Impostor!]

Terrible, Terrible flash; Good Message.

Only about three buttons worked. You should have added a hit zone around them. I suggest you resubmit it. I don't really like this animation, but I hate Madness more.
The Madness series has never been original. It's stickmen without limbs, and is actually easier to do, in most cases.
I bet I could get someone with no flash talent to make a decent Madness cartoon, and it wouldn't look bad.

imjeffhip responds:

all the buttons work, you must not be clicking them right

[Pico Epsilon]

Stiffy

The Characters and animation was all so stiff. I couldn't bare it!
Please work on this. People don't usually stand so straight; as for the animation... well, it all seemed the same...

BiffTheTimid responds:

You are the best reviewer in the history of reviewers. How can I leave reviews as eloquently put, and full of insight and wit as you? Teach me.

[Clucky]

Decent...

My biggest problem is all the unnecessary actions you did.
Nice frame-by-frame work, but it looked like you did the voices AFTER you did the animation. Bad idea.
You also didn't have to do so many scenes.

Brewster responds:

Thanks you're right I did so SOME of the voices after the animation but only the gasps and the short ones
Like it says in the description the lipsynching is a little off
And the unnecessary action were for comical affect but I guess I failed at that one
:(

[Mario's Suicide Struggle]

I've seen better

Pros:
%u2022You had quite a few.
%u2022Good story premise.

Cons:
%u2022The font wasn't very 'Mario'.
%u2022The Music didn't match
%u2022Sound Effects?
%u2022Animation: your weighting/timing were kinda weird for, the most part.

Betterluck next time

hamedn responds:

The question is, have you been able to MAKE anything better than this...

I think not!

[Jack is a Super Hero]

Another egoraptor clone...

Just what we need...
So, anyway: The story was terrible. I was confused and 50% of the time, the audio was too blurry to make out.
I'd like to say the art was decent, if every other NG portal Submission didn't look identical.
The Animation used a simple movement technique popular with '70's-'80's animation. You hold for so many frames, distracting the audience with secondary animation. (Speaking of which is really lacking)
The Lip-syncing was okay, but the voices were too close together -- get a second actor -- and, as I mentioned before, blurry. Find a better place to record.

AdequateJ responds:

yay my first bad review on newgrounds!... or the internet for that matter! Oh god, I'd just like to thank all of my frineds, family... my grandmother who couldn't be here today. Jesus, if he's listening seems like he's been pretty busy lately. Anyone else who made this possible. I love you all!