5SS-PsychoWiLL's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flashticles]

Been there

It looked okay, but the ideas were terrible.
Something awful does the exact same thing, but usually has thought put into it.
The next time you do this, if you do, use some insightful wit, or theme.

[Milkshake (Clay)]

Nonsense

That didn't make any sense. I'm sorry, but if you are going to animate using clay, you should at least have it make sense. You may as well have had a milkshake sitting there, that would have been funnier, and more logical.
When capturing frames, be more careful.

WillyWonkaNerds responds:

it was my first try making a animation using clay i'll try better next time.

[silly nature]

Ugh...

When the credits are the best animated part, you know you need to work on it.
The lips moved worse than badly dubbed anime; and worse, you just copied it for all the characters!
The "human" was wearing a poncho, so you didn't have to do a walk cycle. (Why would someone be wearing a poncho there?)
Your attempts at squash and stretch did not work at all; they made it worse.
The strongest point was the story, which was better than 85% of the works submitted to the portal.
If you must make a series, please work on all prospects of the process.

[Lucas cant brawl]

Okay

There were a lot of still frames in there. It looks like you simply blocked out an animation with keys. If I were you, I'd go back and fill in the inbetweens.

PS: Lucas is a better Brawler than Snake.

Horsenwelles responds:

blocked out an animation with keys? wtf???

and i know lucas is a better energy based brawler than snake, but snake has waaay more advantages in no-item combat than lucas

i suck as snake and rule as lucas lmao (thats the irony)

[Curse You Family Guy!]

Ugh...

I understand your intention was to show how Family Guy is "childish", but this isn't the way to do it.
You have to do something like "Peter, why aren't you at your new Job?" "I am Lois, like the time I was at my last new job..."

Right? Right. Just stupid stuff like that. And even crappy voice acting is better than captions.

[Angry Dog - Blood Shower]

Rabble

The animation was pretty good, especially for such a decent story. The major problem was the flow of the entirety lacked. You could have timed the film's cuts and beats better, I think.

[a robot plants a tree]

Question.

Ask yourself: "What is the purpose of this?".
You offer the audience an intriguing setup, with a let down of a payoff.
I'd almost say it was a ClockCrew Prod.
It's not without it's merit. I can give you advice, but it's not going to fit in a review.

[Robot K16]

Why?

Why did it escape? How did it escape? Who shut it off? You give so little information in the story, you lack character development, if you are going to tween, go ALL the way (the magically sliding of pieces into places looks awful), you wimped out on the run cycle, and it could certainly be improved (it looks like he's floating), and Why does he have Garbage bags on him?

Pandoryk responds:

Don't watch at the 1st degree but try to think at the 2nd degree.
Thx for the review anyway ^^

[IF Round 4: vs Cyril P1]

The art was great

The art was great, but the story was terrible. The voice actors lacked... anything (emotion, etc). Assuming this is based on FF, I wouldn't recommend continuing the series, as everyone knows it already. And it would be a waste of time, and talent.